In less than 100 pages, I have already been given something to mull around in my mind.
While reading chapter two, the author begins to flesh out the character Allegra, who has secrets (don't we all), and her lover is determined to drag them out of her with pleas of intimacy, "They'll be our secrets. Trust me." (Does that sound like she could be trusted?) The first secret Allegra shared is about an encounter in grade school with a "special" boy named Billy. Billy often talked to a basketball and on day showed Allegra his privates. Weeks after this incident, Allegra decided to tell her father what she saw, but her motives for telling are questionable. This is her big secret.
She wanted her father's complete attention and wasn't receiving it. In an attempt to gain it, she told him about this older boy that showed her his privates while on the playground. Unfortunately, she omitted that he was in the "special" class at school and that he spoke complete gibberish to a basketball. If she was seeking attention she definitely got it...her father hit the roof and demanded the boy's name. Once given a name, he drove to Billy's home to confront his parents. What greeted him at the door was a distraught, disheveled woman that accused him of not even caring about them...that no one cared about them. Billy stood behind his poor mother talking to his basketball. Filled with contrition for his behavior and disappointment in his daughter the father stammered his apologies and sent Allegra to her room when they arrived home.
This got me thinking... How often have I omitted or embellished pertinent information from a story in an attempt to influence a listener or reader's perspective? Have I carefully crafted a story to make people join my side or pay attention to me? Is my need for attention or sympathy so great that I would disregard facts? As a student of history, I was taught to remove as much personal bias from my research and writing (not an easy task). As a student of literature and creative writing, I was taught to tell a great story, which at times requires embellishment, larger than life characters, and/or filling in the gaps when needed...even if the information is a fabrication.
Facts can be a game changer...whether omitted or shared. Even while writing this blog, I know there are things that I omit from my stories. Tiny facts that, in my opinion, won't make much difference in the end, but maybe I'm wrong. My perceptions of the world around me, my motivations in any given situation, and my interpretations of events are filtered and based on my life experiences. Without knowing some of those facts about my life how can a reader fully understand why I do, say, think or write the things I do?
Here are some of my personal facts (at least a few I am willing to share right now):
- My father was spiritually raised in a Rescue Mission. My mother was spiritually raised in a Lutheran church. My brother and I were spiritually raised in a Southern Baptist church. It is deeply imprinted into our core. Some hints of that influence may show up every once in awhile and it might start showing up more often in the near future. I will not apologize for this.
- My family is a run of the mill, blue collar, skilled labor, everyday kind of family. We are middle class...not upper middle, but not necessarily lower. I grew up surrounded by gruff, hearty, loud, giant (and some not so giant) men. Mostly mechanics or engineers or some other closely related field. The kind of men that once they are gone the room feels too empty. My husband is one of these men, just not so loud or gruff.
- I grew up heavy, big boned, plump, (insert random alternative term for FAT), and it totally shaped how I view the world. Those wounds heal with time and perspective, but those scars always remain. I lost the weight through surgery (no, I didn't take the "easy way out" it was very difficult). As a result, I have lived on both sides of the fence and both are complicated, hurtful, and beautiful all at the same time.
- I wanted a daughter more than anything in the world. I craved a perfect little girl of my own that I could have that special, Gilmore Girl, kind of relationship with that so reflects my own relationship with my mother. I never thought for a second that she wouldn't be 100% healthy and...dare I say... "normal." It has turned my world upside down.
This journey is also teaching me a new sense of humility. I am recognizing my faults, missteps, and errors from the last few years and I am sharing it all with you. I DON'T want to omit information from my writings. I DON'T want to mislead you or manipulate feelings of pity for attention. I DO want to make my writing enjoyable to read, but the facts must be there or it is all for nothing. I am recommitting myself to offering you the most honest look at myself and our life...the good, the bad, and the in between.
*Between you and me...it's sorta okay.